i appreciate ur hardwork and dedication bt no offense to ur work bt from my pov alex was more deserving than that husband ...i mean from start we can see hiw he was cheating even after marriage and don't compare elio with him ...he was being physical with another girl ..elio didn't have any freedom and he didn't hold any compassion for him ...and not to forget how ge treated his own son ....alex was treating elio better and even aurik was happy to call him papa ...if alex didn't involve elio and has kill or got to know the truth before after confronting and reunited with elio would have been better ...and just becoz ml started treating him as human for few days elio started forming love for him ... forgetting every thing that's just ridiculous it's like indian drama.. alex didn't made elio love to take revenge for him ...it was pure from his side ...u may have messed up the storyline to portray alex as villian made it seem he was using his love for revenge and ml was such a good person ....just my pov .. personally nobody deserve a cheating spouse and careless father ...alex was more deserving of love ...bt it was good to read
2025-04-30
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Lian😼
wait wait wait who is aurik mother? like in my guess you didn't told us who is aurik mother or maybe I have miss it/Swe😅at/
2025-05-07
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Fairy Lilly
Your story is amazing. There were so many times when I was wondering who's the bad guy and who's the good one. Really exciting /Smile/ Thank you /Heart/
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Raksh Zameer
i appreciate ur hardwork and dedication bt no offense to ur work bt from my pov alex was more deserving than that husband ...i mean from start we can see hiw he was cheating even after marriage and don't compare elio with him ...he was being physical with another girl ..elio didn't have any freedom and he didn't hold any compassion for him ...and not to forget how ge treated his own son ....alex was treating elio better and even aurik was happy to call him papa ...if alex didn't involve elio and has kill or got to know the truth before after confronting and reunited with elio would have been better ...and just becoz ml started treating him as human for few days elio started forming love for him ... forgetting every thing that's just ridiculous it's like indian drama.. alex didn't made elio love to take revenge for him ...it was pure from his side ...u may have messed up the storyline to portray alex as villian made it seem he was using his love for revenge and ml was such a good person ....just my pov .. personally nobody deserve a cheating spouse and careless father ...alex was more deserving of love ...bt it was good to read
2025-04-30
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Lian😼
wait wait wait who is aurik mother? like in my guess you didn't told us who is aurik mother or maybe I have miss it/Swe😅at/
2025-05-07
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Fairy Lilly
Your story is amazing. There were so many times when I was wondering who's the bad guy and who's the good one. Really exciting /Smile/ Thank you /Heart/
2025-04-29
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