I don't like how Jk act here, but the fact that his mother force every thing on him may be this is bad for him he didn't do any thing on his well, i don't satisfy his actions, but forcing things is bad too
2025-01-17
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Yashi Gupta
bro don't mind but your story content is good but...your typing skill is so but please improve your typing mistake the story is good but your mistakes is too much and i can't feel character feelings so sorry....😣
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Eian2000
I don't like how Jk act here, but the fact that his mother force every thing on him may be this is bad for him he didn't do any thing on his well, i don't satisfy his actions, but forcing things is bad too
2025-01-17
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Yashi Gupta
bro don't mind but your story content is good but...your typing skill is so but please improve your typing mistake the story is good but your mistakes is too much and i can't feel character feelings so sorry....😣
2024-10-08
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Sufiya Raut
Y ur story is more of past event than of present
2024-06-18
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