THE MAFIA QUEEN (TAEKOOK)
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jungkook (jk)
you mean we lost the deal 😡
namjoon (rm)
calm down jungkook
jungkook (jk)
you want me to calm down Hyung 😡
jungkook (jk)
I'm not angry about the deal I don't even care about it
jungkook (jk)
I'm angry because how the f**k he won against me 😡
taehyung (v)
He must be burning with anger right now 😏
hoseok (jhope)
true Now he will know that someone is even more powerful than him
jimin
But this deal was not that important so why did you waste your time on it 🤔
taehyung (v)
Because I had to show someone that he can lose too 😡
jimin
what happened to him
namjoon (rm)
you should calm down now Jungkook
JongIn (kai)
yes! The deal was not even that important
namjoon (rm)
We know why you are angry, but you should calm down now This was not the last chance and there will be more opportunities so calm down now
yoongi (suga)
We have to go to *** club tonight, we have very important meetings there 😑
they just finished meeting and was. About to leave but Jungkook saw someone or something that made him hella angry
please let me know if I should continue or not
author
can you guess what was it that made jungkook angry 🤔
Comments
Getting bored
ah.... the story plot is quite unique... well not unique but difficult to handle tbh, a hate to love story needs the next level of writing skills... And it's a plot which is difficult for even experienced authors to carve a way of love out of hatred. Don't get me wrong, but I think that you need to read a little more chat stories, gain some more knowledge and experience of how to well represent every scene and character, and then come back again to test your skills... for now I don't think that I will be able to continue it, but don't be disheartened, I was also like you almost 1 and a half years ago where I just wrote down a story thinking that my english is much better than others, but english is not the only factor of the story... there are many more factors which are required to make it a successful story. If you want then I could suggest some awesome stories with excellent writing skills and plot development, I am quite sure that they will turn out to be helpful 😁. So bye-bye for now, best of luck for your author journey 😁
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