author please don't use Hindi and English combo..just use English and no need to even say they are standing or laughing and don't use bracket..I'm sure you have also read story here ..you can get idea like how other author use like symbols /emoji or commas for inner thought
your story line is good but hopefully can understand what I'm trying to say..I'm not good at explaining but hope you get it
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author please don't use Hindi and English combo..just use English and no need to even say they are standing or laughing and don't use bracket..I'm sure you have also read story here ..you can get idea like how other author use like symbols /emoji or commas for inner thought
your story line is good but hopefully can understand what I'm trying to say..I'm not good at explaining but hope you get it
2024-05-31
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