Uhm,the narrative style will look for good if it's said by " Aside " option not by the author itself. Btw, it's just a suggestion,as it came to mind while I was passing from here~
2020-12-08
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TheCryOfLimitations
I'm not good with chat novels but isn't it right for the narrator to speak up more like explaining every each panel? but indeed it's great just the problem is the narrator doesn't have much of a role other than narrating the flow of the characters action but no nothing about the information needed.
Oh and I'm ZK just I logged out because something like some bugs kept limiting my comments...zzzzz its says wait for another day to comment....
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Shining👒Stars(ARiNa.Zennol)٭
Uhm,the narrative style will look for good if it's said by " Aside " option not by the author itself.
Btw, it's just a suggestion,as it came to mind while I was passing from here~
2020-12-08
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TheCryOfLimitations
I'm not good with chat novels but isn't it right for the narrator to speak up more like explaining every each panel? but indeed it's great just the problem is the narrator doesn't have much of a role other than narrating the flow of the characters action but no nothing about the information needed.
Oh and I'm ZK just I logged out because something like some bugs kept limiting my comments...zzzzz its says wait for another day to comment....
2020-12-04
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