I LOVE the story development, but I'd like to give you a suggestion... Don't use newer gen slangs if you're writing a story that's set in mediaeval era, instead of saying OMG you can use Oh dear lord/My goodness etc. It sounds more classy too. And repetition or reuse of certain words/sentences can make the story sound cliché. So, you can alter it as well. And is this story related to a manhwa? Because i feel like I've read the manhwa (the FL pfp looks familiar to me).
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Suki
I LOVE the story development, but I'd like to give you a suggestion... Don't use newer gen slangs if you're writing a story that's set in mediaeval era, instead of saying OMG you can use Oh dear lord/My goodness etc. It sounds more classy too. And repetition or reuse of certain words/sentences can make the story sound cliché. So, you can alter it as well. And is this story related to a manhwa? Because i feel like I've read the manhwa (the FL pfp looks familiar to me).
2025-10-02
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hibkhz
/Smug/
2025-08-05
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Sleeping Beauty🤝
I think I should*
2024-10-01
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