author the story was good... but yk something was missing ... everything seems so professional in their life ... there talk weren't like a family... but kind of professional mettings.... when I read a story. ... I want to get connection with character... that connection was missing... I hope u will take my words nd will work on it
2025-04-08
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Sunrise Sugarbox
ohh wow author ☺️ thank you for such lovely 😍 story
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cutecoco123
author the story was good... but yk something was missing ... everything seems so professional in their life ... there talk weren't like a family... but kind of professional mettings.... when I read a story. ... I want to get connection with character... that connection was missing... I hope u will take my words nd will work on it
2025-04-08
0
Sunrise Sugarbox
ohh wow author ☺️ thank you for such lovely 😍 story
2024-09-08
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my baby 😍
I will support you 💪💪
2024-08-31
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