can I be Frank??? if u keep on writing like this the reader's would lose interest... each episode has your "hi and bye" more instead of the contents... and u wasted first few chapters repeating the same thing again and again... just don't drag and come to the plot... Will ya.?
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Flower pot
can I be Frank??? if u keep on writing like this the reader's would lose interest... each episode has your "hi and bye" more instead of the contents... and u wasted first few chapters repeating the same thing again and again... just don't drag and come to the plot... Will ya.?
2024-02-25
20
Ak
what is mirth?
2024-02-20
8
sweet fox
loving it authy 🙂
2024-02-13
3