prick of a pin
hello there is a parcel for u
crimson
huh but who send it??* take it*
thank you sir *walk away*
crimson was confused with such behavior of a delivery men
crimson
think I need to make a complaint now * take the parcel inside*
the boy took the parcel inside
he was living in an old residence building with few neighbors but they were rude or say scared from something
he enters inside his room and open the box
he cursed as he saw a voodoo doll which was looking very scary
he was feeling very weird looking at that doll
its arms were torn eyes were made up of buttons and the most weird think about the doll was its black hairs which were same as crimson but he didn't care much about it
crimson
guess it would be trouble some
he pick that doll and try to find the sender name
but there was none except a diary
he open the diary and first thing he read was
"We all have something we keep. Mine is a dark wooden box. I hate that fucking box. I hide it away, stuffed at the back of my bottom drawer, wrapped in a tea towel so I don’t even have to look at it. My husband doesn’t know why I refused to have ‘walnut’ laminate flooring in our dining room. It’s because it reminds me of that bloody box."
crimson
strange * masssage his temple*
he kept that doll on the table beside his bed and try to sleep
he was in a dark place with no light then he heard a girl crying who was saying I c u doing that
he was roaming in the darkness to find the small girl but he couldn't
he move further and there he saw a doll.......a voodoo doll
he move further and take heavy steps towards the doll
he was few inches away just then the doll move back and jumped on him saying I cu
crimson
huff huff* heavy breath* wh..what was that* looked at the doll which is now on his bed*
he was so confused that how the doll move to his bed own his own but still he ignores it
he do his daily routine and walk out of his room forgetting about the voodoo... while he was locking the main door
he saw a lady in her 50s holding the voodoo doll which was present in his room
crimson
*eyes widen* wait-
he hurriedly open the door again and enter inside his room where the doll was kept
he was shocked to see the doll sitting on the table which he left on bed
crimson
what the hell happening
he looked at his room and then keep the doll on sofa and diary on the table and then left the room
later while walking to his job place he totally forgot about the doll and when he reached their he was busy doing his work
at night when he was eating food with his co workers he chokes
1 person
what happen crim ?
crimson
*cough*wa..water*cough*
the girl pass water to him and he drink it in a glup
crimson
ha ha hiss*in pain*
blood was coming out from his mouth and his eyes were teary he felt a shrap pain in his arm and legs
the co workers were scared seeing such scene infront
they notice broken glass and understand the whole situation
they hurriedly took him to the nearest hospital and other co workers make a complaint against restaurant for serving broke glass to their customers
the glass pieces were stuck in his tongue thankfully he didn't glup any glass piece inside and he took medicine for arm and legs pain too
the Dr prescribed him some medicine and said not to talk in loudly
he was discharge at 3 hrs
his co workers bring him to his residence
1 person
take care crim* left*
he reached infront of his room and try to open the door
when he was trying to open his door he saw his neighbors
he try to greet them but they ignore him as he dont exist in their world...like he is an outsider in there territory
he just nod and head inside
with this he moves to his kitchen to drink the medicine given by the doc
he was feeling the thick liquid taste of copper in his mouth he try to spilt the blood before taking the medicine
he took to the meds and move towards the living room
crimson
* walking with tiredness and pain*
he sat on the sofa and lean backwards
he was thinking about the tragic thing's happend to him from yesterday when he remember about the dairy and doll
he looked for voodoo which he kept on the sofa corner when he left before he leave but now it was not there
he tried to look in living room but he couldn't able to find
he runs towards his bedroom and their he pause at the gate
he looked at the voodoo whose mouth was covered in blood and some glass pieces were also attached to it four pins were attached to the dolls arm amd legs making it look same as crimson condition
he was Scared to see such view
he started searching his whole room to find who did that prank on him but the windows were closed from inside there was no way a person could enter expect the front gate but it was locked it was looking as if a ghost disappear without any trace
he was frustrated and then he decided to read the diary
diary-
" I was 8 when I saw my step mother making this doll using my brothers(23 yrs ) hair , she was a manic who was into black magic but I was a kid and didn't understand these things much but ,later after 2 days my brother died...and the most shocking part was that my brother died in the same way like that voodoo which my step mother made drown in water,i took that curse doll with me hoping to bring my brother back but I was wrong as I did the greatest mistake of my life ....(few pages torn)
I will never let my husband see that curse which I'm hiding deep down in my heart the fear of death the fear of voodoo"
crimson
* what is this crap?*
by saying this he stomp his foot on the floor and rush down grabbing the diary and doll in his hand and throw them in the Dustbin
he take a sigh of relief and went back to his room
he decided to sleep but before it he locked each and every windows and doors of his room
making himself feel safe he sleep
the next morning
he was feeling very lazy to wake up but still he get ready to go his office
by taking a long shower he eats some light food and took his meds
he was walked out of His room but today he saw his neighbors smiling and saying good bye to him
crimson
*locking the door* smile and nod*
he was happy that at least from now on he won't feel awkward.... but maybe he was wrong ?
he walked out and took a public transport
men1-whispers*
men2- whispers*
as soon as he reached his office all the people present there close their nose and said
1 person
u didn't take bath today crimson??
2 person
at least u should use perfume mr crimson
crimson
?? I did take it *in low voice*
the people around him looking at him with disgusting eyes
he felt very ashamed he ran towards the washroom and spray some perfume but still people in the washroom closing their nose with disgust
crimson
*what's happening?*
he ran outside the office but he saw every one making disgusting and weird face by seeing him
there he developed an unknown fear inside him which make him run towards the direction of his house
he ran as fast he could but it took him 20 minute to reached their
he was huffing but still reached near the Dustbin where he throw the doll and diary
but he was late too late as the workers already took the garbage leaving the diary behind
the fear inside him was making him suffocated
he grab that diary and enter inside his room locked it and sat on his bed
diary-
" when I gone outside my husband open that wooden box and saw that creepy doll...at first he laugh but later he try to pull his legs and head out and he successfully did that which made him lose his head and legs as well as life...who so ever will open this cursed doll ,the doll would take his shape. I lost everything and everyone so im committing suicide, at first i was planning to send this doll to church but i want revenge so I'm sending this doll to mr crimson my step mother only grandson he may not even kn me as his grandmother ran away after killing my brother and took over our family property
but as we says karma hits u back she lost those money in gambling ..I will send this diary with the doll if he is lucky enough he would read the diary before or else....till now he will die because of his grandmother greed "
by reading this his hand tremble in fear
he kn what will happen with the garbage ,they will grind it inside the machine
(imagine voodoo doll crashed in it)
just as he realized
~ Grinned~
Sometimes we didn't attempt any crime but still suffers.....maybe because of our ancestors?
so I kn many of u are confused
but dont worry I'm clearing ur doubt's
so the lady whose diary crimson was ready actually was her step aunt
when she saw her one and only family which was her husband died she felt angry and in anger she send this doll to crimson later she died too....to take her revenge she(as a ghost) use broken glass piece and pins to make crimson suffers but he died by his own foolishness
about his neighbors behavior there is a theory which I made....that he is living with ghost in that old residence building which is rented at more cheaper price as his grandmother was a black magician so maybe he could see ghost but he is not aware of this as I said that his grandmother run aways with that money and used it in gambling which made her broken to the extent that his son left him alone with his kid(crimson) so basically he never seen her gm
so when his neighbors(ghost ) good bye him in the end they may new he was going to die so they greet him as he was going to be just like them
Well that my point of view there could be more theory's on this just like I said I will not complete the ending its on u to imagine and create ur own ending
and plz do share ur ending theory with me in comments 💀
(afro Haitian community*Africa*)
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candy
ooo that was horrible 🥺🥺
2024-10-19
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chosen sperm
Abe jab ghar me vodoo doll hoti hai to use sofa pe saja ke nhi rakhte... Marr ke manega ye
2023-12-26
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chosen sperm
bhai what is he didn't care much about it ??... Crimson bhaiya use sense.. horror movies ni dekhi kya 🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
2023-12-26
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