I hope you take this as an opportunity to grow and not in am bad was. you see the thing is I don't see why the fl is acting so she is, from the beginning to now I can't remember a time when she and the child had a moment, like what it's having it's mother right now. I can't feel the emotional connection, sorry to sound like I'm criticizing which is not my goal, for do like your story everything flows except for the emotional connection of the fl ml and the child because really can't remember the development of it. again I hope you take this to grow and not in a bad way 🙌
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Catherine
It's your own choice. You can do whatever you want. If you find it comfortable that way then be it.
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Rosie love 😘
I hope you take this as an opportunity to grow and not in am bad was. you see the thing is I don't see why the fl is acting so she is, from the beginning to now I can't remember a time when she and the child had a moment, like what it's having it's mother right now. I can't feel the emotional connection, sorry to sound like I'm criticizing which is not my goal, for do like your story everything flows except for the emotional connection of the fl ml and the child because really can't remember the development of it. again I hope you take this to grow and not in a bad way 🙌
2021-06-07
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Catherine
It's your own choice. You can do whatever you want. If you find it comfortable that way then be it.
2021-06-07
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�҈҉⃝Incnt_soul
Write here itself author!!!
2021-06-07
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