ur story is so much good author but please try to read ur own story lines again u will get to know why ur story is not that much famous*innocent look*.... I am sry if u feel that I am talking to you in a rude way *feeling bad*.... but u should try to learn English in more clear way that ur story lines can get the feelings of ur words... it's a very good story but there are so many mistakes in words as well as grammer too... please try to correct words cause grammer is not so important if words are clear... and again I am really sorry for my words.... story is so good but we readers can't feel the actual emotions of the story... I already read the whole story cause it's good ... but author shiiiiiiiiiiiiiii please try to be more clear about ur emotions of the story
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ggukvshii
😂😂
2025-03-27
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jungkookahhhhhhh
ur story is so much good author but please try to read ur own story lines again u will get to know why ur story is not that much famous*innocent look*.... I am sry if u feel that I am talking to you in a rude way *feeling bad*.... but u should try to learn English in more clear way that ur story lines can get the feelings of ur words... it's a very good story but there are so many mistakes in words as well as grammer too... please try to correct words cause grammer is not so important if words are clear... and again I am really sorry for my words.... story is so good but we readers can't feel the actual emotions of the story... I already read the whole story cause it's good ... but author shiiiiiiiiiiiiiii please try to be more clear about ur emotions of the story
2024-09-15
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Shabrin Safiya
not wang eun woo?
2024-06-19
1