this book revolved in hospitals, crying, depression, self harm , lack of communication, and many more phases. but what this story lacks is emotion and clear cut explanation. author try to extend the story into more chapters, don't skip time, just explain more with words. you can use POV of person to explain how they feels. it will help you to write long chapters and more episodes. it's just a suggestion cause I found this lack in the story.
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Mikasa 🌟
this book revolved in hospitals, crying, depression, self harm , lack of communication, and many more phases. but what this story lacks is emotion and clear cut explanation. author try to extend the story into more chapters, don't skip time, just explain more with words. you can use POV of person to explain how they feels.
it will help you to write long chapters and more episodes.
it's just a suggestion cause I found this lack in the story.
2024-06-29
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