Story was decent but now....since I'm not a fan of 3 people in a relationship ( Is it called poly relationship? idk), I'm gonna leave my feedback till here cause I'm not gonna continue further.
Story line is good, you didn't forced Taehyung to immediately fall in love with kook and made him prioritise his emotions is what I liked the most. Taehyung took his time to clear his head and then took care of Jungkook out of natural humanity first then he slowly and steadily accepted him as his enigma which is the second thing I liked.
Jimin's character till here is the most irritating one for me. He and yoongi are not at all guilty and are expecting Taehyung to forgive them without putting any effort. What did Jimin thought? Just by saying sorry everything will be normal?
Jin and Namjoon's are side characters so nothing much to say about them but I hope you give terrible and horrible death to Kai. A man who assault someone shouldn't be blessed with an easy death.
Hope you make more Taekook story rather than poly ones, I would love to read more of your work. Bye bye😊
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Story was decent but now....since I'm not a fan of 3 people in a relationship ( Is it called poly relationship? idk), I'm gonna leave my feedback till here cause I'm not gonna continue further.
Story line is good, you didn't forced Taehyung to immediately fall in love with kook and made him prioritise his emotions is what I liked the most. Taehyung took his time to clear his head and then took care of Jungkook out of natural humanity first then he slowly and steadily accepted him as his enigma which is the second thing I liked.
Jimin's character till here is the most irritating one for me. He and yoongi are not at all guilty and are expecting Taehyung to forgive them without putting any effort. What did Jimin thought? Just by saying sorry everything will be normal?
Jin and Namjoon's are side characters so nothing much to say about them but I hope you give terrible and horrible death to Kai. A man who assault someone shouldn't be blessed with an easy death.
Hope you make more Taekook story rather than poly ones, I would love to read more of your work.
Bye bye😊
2024-04-18
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driemee cone >🖤°•
best
2024-05-06
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VS ;)
woah gona follow the author
2024-03-02
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