I BECOME THE KING'S CONCUBINE ~ [ TAEKOOK ]
Cheating ~ ?? ¹⁸¹
AT JASMINE (여자 이름) PAVILION
Ji-Hun open towards the window and slightly open a window to let the pheremenons and sèx smell to fade away ~ The smell was too much for Ji-Hun to breath in the air ~ Ji-Huj walk towards Taehyung and sit beside him and slightly move him ~ While Taehyung move and whine in sleep cause he has been awake whole night ~
Taehyung ~
Mmm ~ Let me sleep ~ ** whine **
Ji-Hun / Maid
** gasp seeing the love bites on Taehyung's body **
Ji-Hun / Maid
Who came here last night , Hyung...... ?? ** seriously **
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ᴛᴀᴇ ᴡɪᴛʜ ᴋᴏᴏᴋɪᴇ ғᴏʀ ʙʀᴇᴀᴋʏ(ᴅᴅ)
she asked to make it reach 500 it was reader's choice to vote as they like, she also said she did her best to give us the updates and its her choice if she want to drag the story line or not if u don't want to read leave pointing out mistake is ok but calling them cheap is way out of like and if not for popularity why u think ppl write putting so much hard and can't even expect that much attention plz if u don't understand then don't say whatever u want it might hurt someone's feelings so think before u say something
I wrote the above paragraph for her previous comment but she deleted it so it didn't load, I don't even understand what she is saying like if she thinks it has no plot y is she still reading just leave I feel bad for her that she has such a cheap mind to call someone's hardwork cheap they say u see what u r, if u r bad u see that in other when they do better than u
2023-12-13
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~♣~ArO🐣♣
After saying everything, She said that "I don't hate you through"😂😂😂
BTW, wasn't it though!?
Shouldn't it would be like "I don't hate you though"!?
Listen girl, *BEFORE CORRECTING OTHERS YOU SHOULD CORRECT YOURSELF FIRST* AND DON'T EVEN TALK ABOUT AUTHOR'S STORY PLOT.., IF DON'T UNDERSTAND THEN DON'T READ. NO ONE IS FORCING YOU...(ಠ益ಠ)
2024-04-23
0
Dipika Dipi
whatttttt I'm surprised, ik not everyone has same taste but this story is so unique and this plot is so amazing how can she say this story has no plot.....???
i was getting tired of reading the same stories, same plot in different writing styles...!!!!
if she don't like it then who said her to read????
and if people don't like this story why should they vote and read this further????
author nim deserve popularity and this story is unique and interesting....!!!
idk why tf she commented that sh!t 😑😒
2024-03-19
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