the story is like a roller coaster but without any emotion. lf author give lead character pov then lt will be much better
2024-05-24
4
Navyatha Bagula
update soon pls
2024-05-23
1
URI💜
since this story name is chasing the ex wife... you could start with pov of the husband..we still didn't know what happened after Sofia left..and we still didn't know when they both will meet..and what they feel for each other.. I don't want to be rude..but I think you should speed up the story because from my pov there is nothing to be excited to read.. everything is Fogge... even FL came back...she didn't even remember him for a second..so can't understand what to say about love, revenge and cold CEO...!!! and we don't know anything about "the husband"...so can't predict anything about him either...!!! if possible...do something about their reunion and start the chasing game.. and I can tell you love/revenge/cold CEO...💜
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Jyoti Sharma
the story is like a roller coaster but without any emotion. lf author give lead character pov then lt will be much better
2024-05-24
4
Navyatha Bagula
update soon pls
2024-05-23
1
URI💜
since this story name is chasing the ex wife... you could start with pov of the husband..we still didn't know what happened after Sofia left..and we still didn't know when they both will meet..and what they feel for each other.. I don't want to be rude..but I think you should speed up the story because from my pov there is nothing to be excited to read.. everything is Fogge... even FL came back...she didn't even remember him for a second..so can't understand what to say about love, revenge and cold CEO...!!! and we don't know anything about "the husband"...so can't predict anything about him either...!!!
if possible...do something about their reunion and start the chasing game..
and I can tell you love/revenge/cold CEO...💜
2024-05-23
10