I want lin ye and yuki together ml should compensate for hurting her in the past. he should care , and love the fl.
everyone needs a second chance
2020-10-22
2
Lucie
OKAY... I THINK THE STORY IS ALL OVER THE PLACE. DON'T GET ME WRONG, I APPRECIATE THE EFFORT YOU ARE PUTTING INTO THE STORY. BUT I THINK YOU SHOULD OUT MORE THOUGHT TO WHAT YOU WANT TO HAPPEN IN STORY. ONCE YOU HAVE YOUR MAIN PLOT YOU CAN MAKE AS MANY TWIST AS YOU WANT
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mia snow 😄
I want lin ye and yuki together ml should compensate for hurting her in the past.
he should care , and love the fl.
everyone needs a second chance
2020-10-22
2
Lucie
OKAY... I THINK THE STORY IS ALL OVER THE PLACE. DON'T GET ME WRONG, I APPRECIATE THE EFFORT YOU ARE PUTTING INTO THE STORY. BUT I THINK YOU SHOULD OUT MORE THOUGHT TO WHAT YOU WANT TO HAPPEN IN STORY. ONCE YOU HAVE YOUR MAIN PLOT YOU CAN MAKE AS MANY TWIST AS YOU WANT
2020-10-14
3
Starlie🌠
author clear the misunderstanding
2020-10-13
1