The ending was trash. I expected something amazing with your fantastic plot.
In reality both of them are right and wrong. I can't blame neither of them. She chose to gamble with her body and he tormented with what that has came to him. A relationship purely started in lust. Ofcourse it could never have a smooth flow. But they lacked communication and understanding. She didn't wanted his love. He failed to make her feel secure. He is a vampire who witnessed the death of his countless companions and he dropped the idea of love and pleasured himself. It's not a simple thing to open his cold or in other words dead heart beat for someone.
And the fl.... What should I say? It's a path she chose herself without hardworking for her goal. She took the initiative but still she was broken by his tormentation
I am not asking to forgive him easily. But they needed quit time to undertake each other and cute family time and love life.They deserves a happy ending.
I liked the plot very much and waited so much for your update. But it was disappointing. Anyway it's your choice andi respect it. I just told my opinion in the perspective of a reader
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Janiol Olivera
author please update
2024-01-18
0
Jirina__isha
The ending was trash. I expected something amazing with your fantastic plot.
In reality both of them are right and wrong. I can't blame neither of them. She chose to gamble with her body and he tormented with what that has came to him. A relationship purely started in lust. Ofcourse it could never have a smooth flow. But they lacked communication and understanding. She didn't wanted his love. He failed to make her feel secure.
He is a vampire who witnessed the death of his countless companions and he dropped the idea of love and pleasured himself. It's not a simple thing to open his cold or in other words dead heart beat for someone.
And the fl.... What should I say? It's a path she chose herself without hardworking for her goal. She took the initiative but still she was broken by his tormentation
I am not asking to forgive him easily. But they needed quit time to undertake each other and cute family time and love life.They deserves a happy ending.
I liked the plot very much and waited so much for your update. But it was disappointing. Anyway it's your choice andi respect it. I just told my opinion in the perspective of a reader
2024-01-16
16
liza
no
2024-01-11
1