I think your story isn't organized also, has many confusing scenes. I start to hate the story really you make decisions not acceptable 😒 I don't understand your point author really. you make conflict with the characters only and from my reading I think you don't understand what you're writing or you don't know how to explain the story right you only made new characters without any target 😤 I am really upset
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𝖈𝖍𝖚𝖇𝖇𝖞~𝖈𝖍𝖊𝖊𝖐𝖘-`ღ´-
Bro why
2023-12-05
3
𝖈𝖍𝖚𝖇𝖇𝖞~𝖈𝖍𝖊𝖊𝖐𝖘-`ღ´-
I knew it
2023-12-05
2
N.Lemon
I think your story isn't organized also, has many confusing scenes. I start to hate the story really you make decisions not acceptable 😒 I don't understand your point author really. you make conflict with the characters only and from my reading I think you don't understand what you're writing or you don't know how to explain the story right you only made new characters without any target 😤 I am really upset
2023-12-02
3