author your plot was good but your writing is so confusing that it makes your story also so complicated to understand it's like you are making some times jungkook as bad sometimes jungkook parents sometimes tae's dad it's make us to lose interest om your story sorry it's just my opinion......
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author your plot was good but your writing is so confusing that it makes your story also so complicated to understand it's like you are making some times jungkook as bad sometimes jungkook parents sometimes tae's dad it's make us to lose interest om your story sorry it's just my opinion......
2024-01-30
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