my feed back author nimmmmm is so far it is good 👍 for a tip 1: it would be good if you could put an warning ⚠️ before hand in the chapter if there are going to be some 18+scene. I know you did but only at the intensed One if you could pls also put it in scene if they are going to like kiss for really long time or it gets intensed but not fully 18+ cuz I am one of those reader who get sensitive quick I hope it is not a bother cuz I enjoy your story and would like to keep reading while skipping those part easily Thank you 2. I don't want to sound rude But for suggestion I hope our FL develop character change while facing Ml . so that she won't feel all week like she is right now I mean it is totally understandable because he sent her to be killed. But I hope it doesn't stay like that for long 🤠!LET GO CUNNING FL
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writer taetae(✷‿✷)
i hate that Rayn 😡😡😡😡
2022-05-13
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my feed back author nimmmmm is so far it is good 👍 for a tip
1: it would be good if you could put an warning ⚠️ before hand in the chapter if there are going to be some 18+scene. I know you did but only at the intensed One if you could pls also put it in scene if they are going to like kiss for really long time or it gets intensed but not fully 18+ cuz I am one of those reader who get sensitive quick I hope it is not a bother cuz I enjoy your story and would like to keep reading while skipping those part easily Thank you
2. I don't want to sound rude But for suggestion I hope our FL develop character change while facing Ml . so that she won't feel all week like she is right now I mean it is totally understandable because he sent her to be killed. But I hope it doesn't stay like that for long 🤠!LET GO CUNNING FL
2022-04-24
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