i have something to say...... author 1.you are going too fast author 2.its OK dear little perverse is necessary to have a good sex life I'm being practical here 3.there was no foreplay it's means you are too innocent to write .... those scene but all in all good work 4.the image you try to portray for fl got ruin since were going too fast so take it slow you are doing really good your grammar are also a good and your sentence are clear for what you want to portray but you mix up some . it's alright though don't worry 5. If I hurt your feelings please ignore me and be disheartened and do continue your work please. ... 😊
2020-07-21
22
Akira4378
You are going to have to ask the god of cakes for a lot of forgiveness
2020-07-18
4
TheVenerable
really ruined the image of the fl.. why author why
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i have something to say...... author
1.you are going too fast author
2.its OK dear little perverse is necessary to have a good sex life I'm being practical here
3.there was no foreplay it's means you are too innocent to write .... those scene but
all in all good work
4.the image you try to portray for fl got ruin since were going too fast so take it slow you are doing really good your grammar are also a good and your sentence are clear for what you want to portray but you mix up some .
it's alright though don't worry
5. If I hurt your feelings please ignore me and be disheartened and do continue your work please. ... 😊
2020-07-21
22
Akira4378
You are going to have to ask the god of cakes for a lot of forgiveness
2020-07-18
4
TheVenerable
really ruined the image of the fl.. why author why
2020-07-15
4