Dear Author,
Kudos!! To your Hard Work.
*I've read your first five chapters and the last five chapters. Trust me everything was well and good- the storyline is fresh for a reborn lead. I've read many comics including books few of them have a MODERN REBORN for the female lead this part got me unique.
While reading I found that the appearance of the male lead was too quick { I guess the reason behind could be the story is in a* Chat Story form instead of a novel }
I feel that the past of the female lead is being moreover losing.
There's one more thing I would like to highlight the spelling errors. I completely understand being a human we do have a typo error.
*For instance:- In a chapter, you wrote "I don't no that" the correct sentence should be "I don't know".
I love the cover of your chat story!!
I love the way how you have made great use of images in the chapters. It's a realistic and remarkable way to convey the feelings of the characters to the readers like us*.
**RECOMMENDATIONS:-
To convey the emotions or any feelings of the characters, please use capital letters and furthermore use punctuation(. , "?)
Try to resist spelling errors because there were many in the further chapters.
Try to make it further suspense, twist turns and create a curiosity in the readers like us**.
*Moreover, I loved reading it and we're looking the more upcoming chapters. I gave you "5" stars.
Good luck!!! for your chat story. Keep writing and growing!!
Thanks&Regards
XOXO*!!
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Comments
♥︎✞ʟɪʟʏ✞♥︎ sca
I already read this chat story. Plz update.
2020-07-26
2
Sura marriot
I love the way u have given an honest review to the author. it's perfectly in details and suggestions are also good. I am happy that you are not judging an author like us on grammar. Good work girl keep going
2020-06-11
1