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hope you guys enjoy the story
My version of
" DELIVERANCE OF THE COUNTERATTACK "
Charles (Mc)
I have everything..
Charles (Mc)
Wealth, family
Charles (Mc)
i was satisfied with all i have
car stops infront of X building
driver hurriedly comes and opens the door
with elegance someone stepped out from car
Charles (Mc)
after long time i came to my home again
Charles (Mc)
Lets suprise them with sudden appearance
Charles (Mc)
*open the door and goes inside apartment*
Charles (Mc)
what's this sound *frowns*
Charles (Mc)
where it coming from ?
Charles (Mc)
*Goes to his bedroom*
Charles (Mc)
*standing outside the door*
*notices cloths on floor*
Charles (Mc)
sound coming from here ? who?
unknown
mmhh~dont-don't tease me
unknown
You always gentle to my brother *sulking*
unknown
while you always tease me..*whines*
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
your brother never let me touch him
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
*caressing other persons cheeks*
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
during all this year's in university.
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
He always keeps that cold face who will get interest in doing it with him anyway
unknown
*looking at Charles eyes*
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
See how you adorable you are
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
*kisses his cheeks*
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
how can he compared to you
unknown
don't be so mean~~you meanie
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
but you like this mean guy
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
kissing all over--
Charles (Mc)
*by listening everything*
Charles (Mc)
*stood while clenching his fist*
unknown
*notices Charles 👀*
Chris (Charles step-bro)
baby~i'm feeling so uncomfortable 😣
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
*chuckles* oki i will carry you and i will wash you 😘
Chris (Charles step-bro)
mm
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
*carries Chris*
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
*shocked*
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
ch-charles
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
*drops Chris down*
Chris (Charles step-bro)
ugh..
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
why are you back soon? aren't you coming-
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
*goes near to Charles*
Chris (Charles step-bro)
*scared by Charles look*
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
*panic--
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
listen-listen it's not like what you saw
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
it's-its..
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
mm-misunderstanding
Charles (Mc)
I was away for few months and came back as soon as possible to only find my dear boyfriend and my dear little brother doing something very important.
Charles (Mc)
I thought i will suprise you guys but hahaa-you both really surprised me
Chris (Charles step-bro)
*by walking unstably came towards Charles*
Chris (Charles step-bro)
Brother-
Chris (Charles step-bro)
*holds Charles hands and kneels down*
Chris (Charles step-bro)
*trembling*
Chris (Charles step-bro)
*crying*
Chris (Charles step-bro)
brother please if you want to hit you can hit me
Chris (Charles step-bro)
if you want to kill, you can kill me *sob sob*
Chris (Charles step-bro)
Brother it's not his fault
Chris (Charles step-bro)
Everything is my fault *hIC hic*
Chris (Charles step-bro)
please you both don't do fight because of me *crying hard*
Chris (Charles step-bro)
I beg you i beg you *wah 😭😭*
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
.....
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
hey stand up..it's not your fault
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
we big brothers will sort out everything ourselves
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
you will feel pain..stand up
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
*looks at Charles*
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
don't give him hard time it's useless
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
we both will talk
Derek (charles Ex-Bf)
he is young anyway leave him
Comments
Day Dreamer😴
may I ask by your version what did you mean? will you just turn the comic into chat story? or will you change the plot in some way ?
2023-05-22
0
❦𝕹𝖎𝖌𝖍𝖙𝖒𝖆𝖗𝖊❦
Ew I hate that line especially coming from people like you…
2023-05-07
4
•°Yuki Yuki°• <3
Glad they got caught 💀
2023-03-13
4