I read your novel up to Ep:6 , and I think you have a lot of potential as a writer. I enjoyed the parts that I read, and I think you have a good sense of storytelling. I also think that there are some areas where you could improve, such as pacing and little grammatical and vocabualry errors . However, I believe that with some constructive feedback and hard work, you could turn this into SOMETHING GREATER THAN IT ALREADY IS. Keep up the good work!💕💕
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DunkPool
I read your novel up to Ep:6 , and I think you have a lot of potential as a writer. I enjoyed the parts that I read, and I think you have a good sense of storytelling. I also think that there are some areas where you could improve, such as pacing and little grammatical and vocabualry errors . However, I believe that with some constructive feedback and hard work, you could turn this into SOMETHING GREATER THAN IT ALREADY IS. Keep up the good work!💕💕
2023-11-21
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