where do you get your ideas from ? its simply very interesting
2020-06-13
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YI25
update plss.. I love the story
2020-06-13
2
Snowlotus
I enjoy the story, I'm loving all of the content, my ONLY problem is you have a seven year old with a harem. The oldest character is 10. the drawings suggest that they could potentially be between 15-20. I'm not telling you how to write your story, but at some point please add a time skip even if that is how you end the novel. I don't want spoilers to your train of thought, I'm just giving you some suggestions that I think may make it better.
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Flirty
where do you get your ideas from ? its simply very interesting
2020-06-13
2
YI25
update plss.. I love the story
2020-06-13
2
Snowlotus
I enjoy the story, I'm loving all of the content, my ONLY problem is you have a seven year old with a harem. The oldest character is 10. the drawings suggest that they could potentially be between 15-20. I'm not telling you how to write your story, but at some point please add a time skip even if that is how you end the novel. I don't want spoilers to your train of thought, I'm just giving you some suggestions that I think may make it better.
2020-06-12
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