Chapter 34: New Demon Lord
\~five years before\~
“Cheer cheer!”
The entire colosseum filled with applause and cheers as finally after many years of innumerable defeats, a new demon lord has been declared.
The thousands of Demons filling the colosseum with noise, fell silent once the Demon King, Val,...
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A Demon Lord’S Obsession
Chapter 34: New Demon Lord
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Lyndsey Jaiyen
Very well done, the only criticism I would have is that there’s almost no descriptions of the fights and it plays out like he one shot all the other demon lords but if that were so then he wouldn’t have as many scars and it makes it out to be like the other demon lords are too weak, but this is still something that could be covered by flashbacks later depicting the different demons that he fought against individually, he could have finished the first two easily but the other demon lords would have become more difficult to beat especially when he was having to fight consecutive battles when his opponents were fresh. Sorry for being nit picky I just don’t like plot holes. Please keep going with your story your writing is still really good and I look forward to seeing you improve over time.
2022-05-04
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wcrism
Nice chapter, author!
I loved how it showed a little bit about Leon's past.
2020-02-21
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