Seriously? It’s too soon to say I love you. Based on what her looks? Also she seems a little too naive and compliant for what she’s been through.
2023-03-10
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Lyndsey Jaiyen
It’s going well, as both are experiencing boy likes girl etc for the first time. He hasn’t had relationships with girls despite being a demon of his age because he doesn’t want to end up like the others which explains his inexperience with her but his instincts are probably going to be driving his side of the relationship to an increasing degree. While her side of the relationship is going to be mainly her dependance on him and her fear of abandonment which will drive her to be “useful”. Both backstories need to eventually get fleshed out to support their behaviors but so far sooooo good. Keep up the good work!
2022-05-04
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Kirsty Ann Russell
It’s adorable not my usual interest seems very virgin lovey dove innocent but I’m still curious to see how it all flows and pans out usually when I think obsession it’s death before separation Luna’s trauma gives her that quick to hold onto stress without him around. would love a little more passion, sensation and feel. In my opinion Words of love is one thing but it’s discription of yearning that makes obsessive love your skills are good and I’m interested in more I find the style similar to narrative conversation style over novel keep up the good work
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Kelly Tamburello
Seriously? It’s too soon to say I love you. Based on what her looks? Also she seems a little too naive and compliant for what she’s been through.
2023-03-10
1
Lyndsey Jaiyen
It’s going well, as both are experiencing boy likes girl etc for the first time. He hasn’t had relationships with girls despite being a demon of his age because he doesn’t want to end up like the others which explains his inexperience with her but his instincts are probably going to be driving his side of the relationship to an increasing degree. While her side of the relationship is going to be mainly her dependance on him and her fear of abandonment which will drive her to be “useful”. Both backstories need to eventually get fleshed out to support their behaviors but so far sooooo good. Keep up the good work!
2022-05-04
0
Kirsty Ann Russell
It’s adorable not my usual interest seems very virgin lovey dove innocent but I’m still curious to see how it all flows and pans out usually when I think obsession it’s death before separation Luna’s trauma gives her that quick to hold onto stress without him around. would love a little more passion, sensation and feel. In my opinion Words of love is one thing but it’s discription of yearning that makes obsessive love your skills are good and I’m interested in more I find the style similar to narrative conversation style over novel keep up the good work
2020-07-27
2