Like the story but feedback: too many characters even if that’s the case you can write relation in brackets. Also did they not feel grief?? Life kookie was touched by someone and was sexually harassed but just got over it in a minute? Lastly, In the first few eps he made friends on day 1 and on day 2 he went to stay with her?? A little far fetched. Anyways the story line was nice though
2024-05-03
2
Amn Naveed
that mean ten years ago when she married hope she was only 16😱😱😱😱🙀🙀🙀💀👄
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Hyunlix
Like the story but feedback: too many characters even if that’s the case you can write relation in brackets. Also did they not feel grief?? Life kookie was touched by someone and was sexually harassed but just got over it in a minute? Lastly, In the first few eps he made friends on day 1 and on day 2 he went to stay with her?? A little far fetched. Anyways the story line was nice though
2024-05-03
2
Amn Naveed
that mean ten years ago when she married hope she was only 16😱😱😱😱🙀🙀🙀💀👄
2023-07-07
3
wtf 😶
2023-07-06
1