i have read this story it was amzing and all but something was missing like you said witch is alive but what happen didnt explain about witch ..... your focus was mostly on gukk or other 3 even if tae was lead as well but he get less focus for me he was even a bit pityful character as his husband and brother love gukk not him.... he carved for brother love bht didnt get as he wish in his 2 lives... tae was orphan so how come his father was along him in aisle.... and death is easy then live in first life tae remain alive so he should have some character develponment or shown how he live after losing all his loved ones but again no scene of him.... all in all the missing thing for me in this story is lack of tae scene and him getting love which he deserved but i dont think he vet or even have that much importance because the story mostly revolve around gukk being loved or around V and jk.... want to say alot but i am not going to say in fear of anyone get hurt but in short i will say even it is amazing story it lack some things that for me is tae character scene and his character developnment he should be strong or maybe cold and all as he rule whole kindgom in 1st live then how come there is no cbaracter developnment???
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KING 👑
i have read this story it was amzing and all but something was missing like you said witch is alive but what happen didnt explain about witch ..... your focus was mostly on gukk or other 3 even if tae was lead as well but he get less focus for me he was even a bit pityful character as his husband and brother love gukk not him.... he carved for brother love bht didnt get as he wish in his 2 lives... tae was orphan so how come his father was along him in aisle.... and death is easy then live in first life tae remain alive so he should have some character develponment or shown how he live after losing all his loved ones but again no scene of him.... all in all the missing thing for me in this story is lack of tae scene and him getting love which he deserved but i dont think he vet or even have that much importance because the story mostly revolve around gukk being loved or around V and jk.... want to say alot but i am not going to say in fear of anyone get hurt but in short i will say even it is amazing story it lack some things that for me is tae character scene and his character developnment he should be strong or maybe cold and all as he rule whole kindgom in 1st live then how come there is no cbaracter developnment???
2024-03-01
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Rani💜
wait a minute........ author u Christian?
2023-07-26
0
Dark wings 😈💜💜(태국)
i really like this story 😍😍
2023-04-29
2