Author you are making the plot too sadistic. Sometimes too much sadism is not good for the story because stories are meant for peace and relating things and if it goes too much negative the beauty of the story will get lost. Hope you understand what I meant by and make necessary corrections if you wish to do so. I'm not forcing you but still as a reader of most of your stories I wish that sincerely.
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Val.
Im sorry for laughing but the name... 😭
2022-11-04
1
xiang_shi
poor Ian
2022-11-01
1
❀❀Black Dahlia❃❃
Author you are making the plot too sadistic.
Sometimes too much sadism is not good for the story because stories are meant for peace and relating things and if it goes too much negative the beauty of the story will get lost.
Hope you understand what I meant by and make necessary corrections if you wish to do so.
I'm not forcing you but still as a reader of most of your stories I wish that sincerely.
2022-11-01
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