why do u have to write like this just to show mafia are bad?? yeah mafias maybe bad like everyone says but that doesn't means you r obliged to show the reality in every novels or chat stories. there are some people who likes to have fantasies of how they want to read that doesn't mean you have to show everyone reality. in your story from the start u showed the pain and the need why he became mafia right. you also showed he was forced to kidnap tae something like that. then why suddenly u got urged to make kook bad like that. what's your actual story write that naa. please don't get influence on the comments and change the story
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I'm guessing that taetae will become pregnant
2023-10-07
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Ritoshree Panja
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2023-01-02
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tataaa
why do u have to write like this just to show mafia are bad??
yeah mafias maybe bad like everyone says but that doesn't means you r obliged to show the reality in every novels or chat stories.
there are some people who likes to have fantasies of how they want to read that doesn't mean you have to show everyone reality.
in your story from the start u showed the pain and the need why he became mafia right.
you also showed he was forced to kidnap tae something like that.
then why suddenly u got urged to make kook bad like that.
what's your actual story write that naa.
please don't get influence on the comments and change the story
2023-01-01
2