i think at this point u should as well give some intro.. and if u wanna keep some suspense in the story, then please make it a bit more clear.... and yeah one more thing... please don't feel bad about it.... but it feels like it's not humans but robots talking, why do they have no expressions.
2023-03-03
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Ishu... 😇🥰😘☺
ok one small problem.. no actually a bit bigger one... JUST WHY DON'T THEY TALK IN FULL SENTENCES... author how are we supposed to know what and whome are they referring to... also give a little bit more details about their activities... i sewer i don't mean to offend.. but i have written more lines then the whole chapter... please u have good plot but please put a little more efforts... please🙏🙏 😩😩
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Ishu... 😇🥰😘☺
now who are they... please make it clear 🙂
2023-03-03
1
Ishu... 😇🥰😘☺
i think at this point u should as well give some intro.. and if u wanna keep some suspense in the story, then please make it a bit more clear.... and yeah one more thing... please don't feel bad about it.... but it feels like it's not humans but robots talking, why do they have no expressions.
2023-03-03
1
Ishu... 😇🥰😘☺
ok one small problem.. no actually a bit bigger one... JUST WHY DON'T THEY TALK IN FULL SENTENCES... author how are we supposed to know what and whome are they referring to... also give a little bit more details about their activities... i sewer i don't mean to offend.. but i have written more lines then the whole chapter... please u have good plot but please put a little more efforts... please🙏🙏 😩😩
2023-03-03
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