author i don't want to discourage u or offend u by saying this... ur story is good and plot is amazing too actually too amazing... however there is just toooooooo much of pov... and it is making story a little boring... and it tires the readers to read and sometimes i don't even know who's pov i am reading... so if only u could mention it that whose pov it is it will be easier to understand and please lessen the pov as it is covering up the story plot... again ur story and story plot are unique and excellent 👌
2023-05-17
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💜😸D. Navi😸💜
author i don't want to discourage u or offend u by saying this... ur story is good and plot is amazing too actually too amazing... however there is just toooooooo much of pov... and it is making story a little boring... and it tires the readers to read and sometimes i don't even know who's pov i am reading... so if only u could mention it that whose pov it is it will be easier to understand and please lessen the pov as it is covering up the story plot... again ur story and story plot are unique and excellent
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💜😸D. Navi😸💜
author i don't want to discourage u or offend u by saying this... ur story is good and plot is amazing too actually too amazing... however there is just toooooooo much of pov... and it is making story a little boring... and it tires the readers to read and sometimes i don't even know who's pov i am reading... so if only u could mention it that whose pov it is it will be easier to understand and please lessen the pov as it is covering up the story plot... again ur story and story plot are unique and excellent 👌
2023-05-17
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💜😸D. Navi😸💜
author i don't want to discourage u or offend u by saying this... ur story is good and plot is amazing too actually too amazing... however there is just toooooooo much of pov... and it is making story a little boring... and it tires the readers to read and sometimes i don't even know who's pov i am reading... so if only u could mention it that whose pov it is it will be easier to understand and please lessen the pov as it is covering up the story plot... again ur story and story plot are unique and excellent
2023-05-17
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