that was awesome I wanna cry cuz it ended😭😭😭 literally my feelings were attached with it the family drama, the misunderstanding and the most reliable think is that the old man she trusted was the snake as in reality we say the one who cares is the one who stabs💝💝💝
2024-06-14
5
𝖬𝖾𝖾𝗍 𝖱𝗈𝗆𝖺𝗇𝗍𝗂𝖼
The story was great, overall. The plot is what got me mesmerized. I can't believe I completed it in a day, 80+ chapters, no less. Other than the spelling errors, some fancy words and too little pov of Eric, it was beautifully written, the mature content was perfect too. The story gets boring when the suspense is easily caught. But this one was different, Mr. Thompson surely played the villain card. I thought Wyatt would later be evil, but I am glad that he didn't. But the ending seemed so rushed, it could be prolonged to a few chapters more with Eric confessing Olivia. Anyways, happy that they got married after overcoming misunderstandings and all those obstacles. I would want an epilogue. You should have written that instead of asking opinions from readers, the story was great, really! 4 stars for this masterpiece! ✨
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that was awesome
I wanna cry cuz it ended😭😭😭
literally my feelings were attached with it
the family drama, the misunderstanding and the most reliable think is that the old man she trusted was the snake as in reality we say the one who cares is the one who stabs💝💝💝
2024-06-14
5
𝖬𝖾𝖾𝗍 𝖱𝗈𝗆𝖺𝗇𝗍𝗂𝖼
The story was great, overall. The plot is what got me mesmerized. I can't believe I completed it in a day, 80+ chapters, no less. Other than the spelling errors, some fancy words and too little pov of Eric, it was beautifully written, the mature content was perfect too.
The story gets boring when the suspense is easily caught. But this one was different, Mr. Thompson surely played the villain card. I thought Wyatt would later be evil, but I am glad that he didn't.
But the ending seemed so rushed, it could be prolonged to a few chapters more with Eric confessing Olivia. Anyways, happy that they got married after overcoming misunderstandings and all those obstacles. I would want an epilogue. You should have written that instead of asking opinions from readers, the story was great, really!
4 stars for this masterpiece! ✨
2024-06-14
3
★ ꯱ׁׅ֒ƙׁׅ֑ᨮ꫶ׁׅ֮ ★
thank you so much for this beautiful story 💞💞💞
2024-06-13
1