not to be rude author but these things should be at the end of the chapter so the readers can enjoy from the beginning and if the beginning is like this then the readers might just get frustrated and it won't benifit you
2022-09-25
1
Flo
seriously the chapter so sort and the author writes for herself to if you want to be author don't talk to much in between
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Alien Neko
not to be rude author but these things should be at the end of the chapter so the readers can enjoy from the beginning and if the beginning is like this then the readers might just get frustrated and it won't benifit you
2022-09-25
1
Flo
seriously the chapter so sort and the author writes for herself to if you want to be author don't talk to much in between
2022-09-18
0
pihu
did Robert say he's alana's 😒
2022-09-11
3