i don't understand what's wrong with you 🤌🏻 author... do you even check your episode before posting 🤔 .... you have uncountable errors 😕 that it gets hard to understand the text .....you have a lot of grammatical mistakes in each and every chapters .... reading this story 😅 feels like an amateur writing.... I'm sorry 😐 i know that i sound rude but you have to learn to correct your mistakes so that in future no one could point out your mistakes just like I am doing right now . I hope you understand what I mean 😃 and what's with this "Rahul Rahul and Rahul" after every 1 or 2 sentences there is "Rahul" instead of the actual character's name ...... it's very confusing 😐
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Kayth'D
oh my sooooo cuteeeee 🤗
2024-06-05
0
💜 Taetae 💜
who is this Rahul?
2023-06-21
1
m_IAN_hae
i don't understand what's wrong with you 🤌🏻 author... do you even check your episode before posting 🤔 .... you have uncountable errors 😕 that it gets hard to understand the text .....you have a lot of grammatical mistakes in each and every chapters .... reading this story 😅 feels like an amateur writing.... I'm sorry 😐 i know that i sound rude but you have to learn to correct your mistakes so that in future no one could point out your mistakes just like I am doing right now . I hope you understand what I mean 😃 and what's with this "Rahul Rahul and Rahul" after every 1 or 2 sentences there is "Rahul" instead of the actual character's name ...... it's very confusing 😐
2023-04-12
3