thanks for your hard work on this story. I will be waiting for more updates. 😊 🥰 🤭
2022-11-03
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The_babz🍭
keep going author u have a good story with u ...... just change something & it will be a great story 🌈🌸💗
2022-07-28
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The_babz🍭
author I'm saying my own view about ur story. pls change ur style of story telling it makes us confused and pls check the spelling of words when u tym some words have different spilling that I have to read the line 3,4 times and don't use to much of short words just use commen word's. try to complete the sentence when the characters are speaking, pls Don't use i with out am ! I have seen that in many times in ur story that's make more complex to read English language
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Carrie
thanks for your hard work on this story. I will be waiting for more updates. 😊 🥰 🤭
2022-11-03
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The_babz🍭
keep going author u have a good story with u ...... just change something & it will be a great story 🌈🌸💗
2022-07-28
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The_babz🍭
author I'm saying my own view about ur story. pls change ur style of story telling it makes us confused and pls check the spelling of words when u tym some words have different spilling that I have to read the line 3,4 times and don't use to much of short words just use commen word's. try to complete the sentence when the characters are speaking, pls Don't use i with out am ! I have seen that in many times in ur story that's make more complex to read English language
2022-07-28
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