The Secret Of Universe

The Secret Of Universe

Chapter-1

Today was a day when I (sanem)was born it's a happyness of becoming a daughter a granddaughter, and a meaning of someone's life . it's a story about my adventures and my stupidity 😂😂😂

Its my first writing I don't know how to write a book but I know how to talk that's why I was titiled as most talkitive person in whole class. so let's talk .....

I was in 12th standard it's first time when I got to know about the meaning of dateing 😂😂.

As usual I got up 8:00 clock and get ready for scl I was very weak and sensitive person in past that's why everyone enjoy to make fun . Today was first day when I talked to a boy about her ex because she was my classmate.

I don't know what mistake I have made 🙁 . I was walking in corridor alone as usual I have many friends but I don't have single friend to whom I can share my feelings to whom I can say that help me in need and with whom I can eat and play 😊 but I don't know that I don't care or im used to it .

I was walking in corridor then I suddenly meet with a friend he was my classmate ex bf. 😂😅....

Hi how are you? my self sanem what's your name with tumbling voice I asked . His cheerful voice touched my ear and he answered my self ishan. Ah! do you know me with doubtful voice. Hahah it was my first encounter with him.

lets say it was the biggest mistake of my life.

we talked about her ex and I don't know when we become soo close. I was standing on the water tap he suddenly enters and beside me. he asked me "do you like me ". with fear in my mind I answered yes. what do you think what will happen next ??

I ran away from there but his cheerful voice touched my ear calling my name "Sanem" I stop and looked behind and he said I like you too 😘.

I got soo excited I skipped the beat and my heart was racing like it's going to explore and my reaction was like killer is standing infront and im going to die. I ran away from there and entered in my class. my face was red like I have seen ghost 👻 .

He used to play football and I used to see him I skipped my music and drawing class for him for first time in my life. everything was running smoothly and suddenly some events happened that should not happened or its good that they happen. we used to see each other in scl assembly and meet each other near water tank and stares or ground. Few days pased like this but all of sudden he started ignoreing me .The best fun was when my classmate called him and asked him that am I really his girlfriend or not .... what do you think he will say ?????

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~seedling 🌱

~seedling 🌱

amazingly written... u ll surely have improvements in upcoming chapters...

2020-05-01

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𝑆𝑎𝑚𝑚𝑦~

𝑆𝑎𝑚𝑚𝑦~

wowwww....nicely written

2020-05-01

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ᗪᗩᖇK ᗩᙅᙓ

ᗪᗩᖇK ᗩᙅᙓ

aye aye aye
nicely done mate
few points

1. correct the spellings (it's distracting) , i know coz i
got the same issues in one of my work and it isn't
updating🤦🏻‍♂️

2. FACE IS RED AND FACE IS PALE
these can't happen at once as pale means
colourless

3. try to add suspence
as in don't tell all the things just when you introduce
sm1
example: (a) FUTURE BF (b) BIGGEST MISTAKE
you can write another beautiful chapter on these
turn of events

REST ALL IS JUST KOOL AS HELL

LOVED THE STORY BASE

INTRODUCE A CRITICAL PLOT SOON TO KEEP THE PAGE TURNING

WAITING FOR THE UPDATE

!!! FINALLY HATS OFF !!!

2020-05-01

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