This story is great. It's just the second episode but I'm already liking it a bit. It doesn't usually happen in my case. The plot was interesting, I've been looking for a mystery thriller with a plot like this, and this is the first. The way the author wrote the story was way, way better than other authors here on Noveltoon. This is the first story that I like the way it is written. One thing though, the narration was too long that it felt like a traditional novel, not a chat novel. It could have been better if there are lots of narration, but separate them. One to two sentences in a chat, then the next one in a separate chat. If you know what I mean. That way, it could feel more like a chat novel. Because chat novels chat bubbles should be short. Regardless, this chat novel is an A.

2023-03-04

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