I Love My Family But They Abandoned Me
Bake together
Narrator
They’ve only known each other for a short time. How could they be so nice to her?
Narrator
How could she hate it when they showed her great hospitality?
Narrator
After a moment of searching her memory, Leticia heard a sigh beside her. As soon as she turned her head, Ian was smiling softly with a look of relief.
Ian Achilles
I’m glad to hear that. I was worried when you didn’t look happy.
Comments
Ishika
I'm sorry I don't mean to offend you authy. but it was supposed to be chat story but you're narrating each and every incident it makes the dialogues longer. you should try writing novels they sui you better. I definitely like the story but I would prefer if the characters have more conversations and less explanation of the situations.
2024-01-05
7
Anonymous
shouldn't this be the narrator's dialogue?
2022-03-23
1