u know author what i really like ur story a lot but the things is i really found the fl and ml weird and kinda disturbing. i mean they dont act normally. the ml keep the fl in dark. where he should have educated her properly and let her live like other children. as a result maple is still an immature at the age of 18 , she act like a 8-10 year old kid . the ml is even taking advantage of her this innocence, she can't even understand that it's not legal. so what if he is ml he just can't touch her neither he can keep her in prison like this. after all she is his niece. and poor maple she can't even understand what is going on with her like as she didn't got educated properly, at the age of 18 she is still like a kid. her maturity is not even like a teenager, i really hate it . she is really living a pathetic life. im sorry it's hurt u author . but still i just think the ml and fl shouldn't be like this. well whatever u work hard to make this story i really appreciate ur work keep going let's see what will happen in the future 😊😊
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Joanna Cameron
kinda hate maple
2022-03-11
3
Tsuī
update
2022-03-05
2
fuck off🖕🏿🖕🏿
u know author what i really like ur story a lot but the things is i really found the fl and ml weird and kinda disturbing. i mean they dont act normally. the ml keep the fl in dark. where he should have educated her properly and let her live like other children. as a result maple is still an immature at the age of 18 , she act like a 8-10 year old kid . the ml is even taking advantage of her this innocence, she can't even understand that it's not legal. so what if he is ml he just can't touch her neither he can keep her in prison like this. after all she is his niece. and poor maple she can't even understand what is going on with her like as she didn't got educated properly, at the age of 18 she is still like a kid. her maturity is not even like a teenager, i really hate it . she is really living a pathetic life. im sorry it's hurt u author . but still i just think the ml and fl shouldn't be like this. well whatever u work hard to make this story i really appreciate ur work keep going let's see what will happen in the future 😊😊
2022-03-05
6