The Starting Of Your Story Is Very Interesting. It's Good To See How You Show The Personality Of the FL And Her Parents. This First Episode Also Gives The Reader An Idea About How The Story Is Gonna Be A Roller Coaster Ride Of Sadness.
Very Well Done. 😊
2023-05-13
1
Crysthy
how funny 🤣🤣 my parent with me but feel like I alone 😭😭 .I think this is my destiny and i have to except it😢😢😔😔
2022-09-19
2
L~
How can he beat his own child..Just come here you man..I will beat you
Comments
The Starting Of Your Story Is Very Interesting. It's Good To See How You Show The Personality Of the FL And Her Parents. This First Episode Also Gives The Reader An Idea About How The Story Is Gonna Be A Roller Coaster Ride Of Sadness.
Very Well Done. 😊
2023-05-13
1
Crysthy
how funny 🤣🤣 my parent with me but feel like I alone 😭😭 .I think this is my destiny and i have to except it😢😢😔😔
2022-09-19
2
L~
How can he beat his own child..Just come here you man..I will beat you
2022-05-17
5