And if you can please update twice or thrice a week.
2020-05-04
1
Bella
The story line is interesting I have read the first part I loved it the second part does lack some things... Like it would be great to show Ron's feeling towards Ziya and not Riya and you know more jealousy and romance can be incorporated in this ... I am writing this after reading episode 10 as far I had no prob but ep 10 was disappointing I shared my views in the comment section of ep 10 please do read it but I know how hard it is to write a novel and the story line is amazing just lacks a few here and there keep up the good work author this is the second novel I love the most after Anna and the French kiss. :))
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Loveya D Hemingson
Author ummm......... I LOVE YOU. ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
2020-05-10
1
Bella
And if you can please update twice or thrice a week.
2020-05-04
1
Bella
The story line is interesting I have read the first part I loved it the second part does lack some things... Like it would be great to show Ron's feeling towards Ziya and not Riya and you know more jealousy and romance can be incorporated in this ... I am writing this after reading episode 10 as far I had no prob but ep 10 was disappointing I shared my views in the comment section of ep 10 please do read it but I know how hard it is to write a novel and the story line is amazing just lacks a few here and there keep up the good work author this is the second novel I love the most after Anna and the French kiss. :))
2020-05-04
2