it's just my view as a reader...hope u just consider it. Anyway it's your story and you can just take it however u like ...but still this doesn't connect.
2021-12-12
8
Ten
I really feel Eric should have been the ml...as no matter what the reason was she once felt for him and also Eric ... doesn't deserve to be getting this character as you have mentioned him first and also in intro ..now bringing past back is just like forcing something to happen which already ended !!
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Alone& cool 😎😏🤟
lily
2024-02-23
1
Ten
it's just my view as a reader...hope u just consider it. Anyway it's your story and you can just take it however u like ...but still this doesn't connect.
2021-12-12
8
Ten
I really feel Eric should have been the ml...as no matter what the reason was she once felt for him and also Eric ... doesn't deserve to be getting this character as you have mentioned him first and also in intro ..now bringing past back is just like forcing something to happen which already ended !!
2021-12-12
7