amazing story I truly loved it. if I must criticise then I would say it should have been longer so I could enjoy reading it more. you could have stretched the middle section with second prince. I would have liked it if 3rd prince was more involved or came back to palace don't know but something to incorporate him more. the ending could have also been longer. I don't like how as soon as second prince died then the story also ended
2024-09-19
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Gurung Sukumari
what?? everytime it's twice!!!🙃😶😶 are you ok mei??🥺
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Elizabeth Rose
amazing story I truly loved it.
if I must criticise then I would say it should have been longer so I could enjoy reading it more. you could have stretched the middle section with second prince. I would have liked it if 3rd prince was more involved or came back to palace don't know but something to incorporate him more. the ending could have also been longer. I don't like how as soon as second prince died then the story also ended
2024-09-19
1
Gurung Sukumari
what?? everytime it's twice!!!🙃😶😶 are you ok mei??🥺
2024-08-19
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Gurung Sukumari
/Whimper/
2024-08-19
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