What are you doing here, I did not see you before in any party. Are you a new actress or model
lacy
No, my friend is a model I am come with her.
lucky
So, where is your friend
lacy
I don't know maybe she is in that crowd.
lucky
Why can not you go there and enjoy the party
lacy
I don't like crowded places.
lucky
Then can I take you to a secret place.
lacy
What you mean
lucky
Don't worry i am not a bad person. I just don't like this place and I was going out but than I saw
you and you are also don't like this place so do you like to giving me your company
After thinking so much lacy said
lacy
OK.. But my friend she...
lucky
Don't worry about her I will say to my friend to drop her home.
After that they goes to rooftop
lucky
So, do you like this, this is my secret place. In this crowded city only this place has some peace
lacy
Hmm...yeh this place is really peaceful
They are talking to some time and he asked
lucky
Today is really a good day in my life.
lacy
Why..??
lucky
Bcz today I met you.
And then a waiter bring a cake to them
lucky
This is for you
lacy
How do you know today is my birthday
lucky
Pfft, this is our meeting cake but now this is your birthday cake.
Author I have some suggestions for you I think you should change the cover and the profile pic of the characters which will make the stry more interesting and good ☺
2021-10-22
3
♠️Arshy♣️🖤
the story's great but you should use punctuations it will help the readers to understand anyway give your best..I'm waiting for the update😃
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♡•●Witchy princess●•♡
Author I have some suggestions for you I think you should change the cover and the profile pic of the characters which will make the stry more interesting and good ☺
2021-10-22
3
♠️Arshy♣️🖤
the story's great but you should use punctuations
it will help the readers to understand
anyway give your best..I'm waiting for the update😃
2021-10-21
10