The story is impressive. I love reading this! Oh and if ur confused abt my comments. They are paragraph comments so that's why. Keep it up, I love the characters😂
2021-11-13
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Vinne.
drop the "has" here
2021-11-13
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Vinne.
"Sorry, Mandy hasn't arrived yet so there is nothing to make"
Use coma for pausing and always capitalize given names👍
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Vinne.
The story is impressive. I love reading this! Oh and if ur confused abt my comments. They are paragraph comments so that's why. Keep it up, I love the characters😂
2021-11-13
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Vinne.
drop the "has" here
2021-11-13
0
Vinne.
"Sorry, Mandy hasn't arrived yet so there is nothing to make"
Use coma for pausing and always capitalize given names👍
2021-11-13
0