I think she married Johnson in the hospital, not Adam.
2022-01-23
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Emily Pearl
Plus author, how old were Johnson and Eva in the story? 20-22? Hopefully still young and not old.
2022-01-22
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Emily Pearl
Author why did it have to be four years later? Could you maybe alter the chapter so it could be six months to a year please? It just doesn't make sense for that much time to pass.
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Emily Pearl
I think she married Johnson in the hospital, not Adam.
2022-01-23
4
Emily Pearl
Plus author, how old were Johnson and Eva in the story? 20-22? Hopefully still young and not old.
2022-01-22
3
Emily Pearl
Author why did it have to be four years later? Could you maybe alter the chapter so it could be six months to a year please? It just doesn't make sense for that much time to pass.
2022-01-22
3