When she got faint on road because lack of food and tiredness
When she opened her eyes she found herself in hospital
And when two boys spike her drink and when she opened her eyes she was going back home safely she never knew that who done this for her so it was Johnson
I think she married Johnson in the hospital, not Adam.
2022-01-23
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Emily Pearl
Plus author, how old were Johnson and Eva in the story? 20-22? Hopefully still young and not old.
2022-01-22
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Emily Pearl
Author why did it have to be four years later? Could you maybe alter the chapter so it could be six months to a year please? It just doesn't make sense for that much time to pass.
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Emily Pearl
I think she married Johnson in the hospital, not Adam.
2022-01-23
4
Emily Pearl
Plus author, how old were Johnson and Eva in the story? 20-22? Hopefully still young and not old.
2022-01-22
3
Emily Pearl
Author why did it have to be four years later? Could you maybe alter the chapter so it could be six months to a year please? It just doesn't make sense for that much time to pass.
2022-01-22
3