plot is good but I feel I have watched drama ,although it is not totally same but plots and very much many incidents are same
2023-07-21
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Riya
It should be farther/further. "farer" is not the correct word. I'm sorry if it sounds rude as I'm not trying to say bad things. I'm just giving tips for improving the story. Plot is very good.👍 So if the words are also good, it will be a great story.
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what with this normal conversation 🤭🤭🤭🤭
2024-01-23
1
📰📜Pɧ§ÍMÎŚŤ ŘËÂĐÉŘ📖📚
plot is good but I feel I have watched drama ,although it is not totally same but plots and very much many incidents are same
2023-07-21
0
Riya
It should be farther/further. "farer" is not the correct word. I'm sorry if it sounds rude as I'm not trying to say bad things. I'm just giving tips for improving the story. Plot is very good.👍 So if the words are also good, it will be a great story.
2021-12-13
6