author you created a good story but here are some mistakes, that others(authors) are repeated continue 1 You're using the name of a character from another country, but not using the language and culture of that country. 2 You're using words like "you know na" which have nothing to do with the Korean language.The word naa (ना) has two meanings, one is "no" in Hindi language and the other is "please" in Thai language. Now tell me which country the characters of the story belong to: 1 South Korea, 2 Thailand, 3 India
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Himanshu Seth
author you created a good story but here are some mistakes, that others(authors) are repeated continue
1 You're using the name of a character from another country, but not using the language and culture of that country.
2 You're using words like "you know na" which have nothing to do with the Korean language.The word naa (ना) has two meanings, one is "no" in Hindi language and the other is "please" in Thai language.
Now tell me which country the characters of the story belong to: 1 South Korea, 2 Thailand, 3 India
2025-10-02
1
De Sire
oh then you are saved
2022-07-29
3
Wren🖤
yeah 😊 so he noticed it
2022-07-14
3